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[StarJim Parallel Universe]

A true rip off.

Please read the whole review.

Dude, Without insulting, it sucked. I think all of your submisions are in the "low level". And this was a true rip off for 8 megabits. You should start working on the art, the concept, and the actionscript. Especially the art. The game was really short and the only reason it was heavy is the music. Also its sad that used such good music for this crap. And im not complaining about the age of yours, and it doesn't matters, because if you don't belive me, im only 12 years old!!! And look at my submissions, for a proof for what you can make with all the things NOT included here.

Now, I do think you CAN fix it. You'd better go and start making some good flashes. Advices: Make games. Iv'e seen you got intrest. Make them addiciting. Don't make it too heavy. Improve the graphics. Make the Frame Rate better. Make smoother animations. Change the concept to something that is not silly/stupid.

So for all the people who say that this is amazing for the age 14, they are SO wrong. I know artists that they are 10 years old and they make AMAZING stuff. And im only 12...

Sorry if I made you feel bad, but Iv'e seen yours submission and I felt like I really had to tell you.

Oh, and 1 star for the good audio.

boney-man responds:

lol you make me laugh

[DodgeBall V2 *Demo*]

Very good

That was amazing, good fit on the music. But you should work on your grammer...

Jey123456 responds:

Hehe, yea, i know, i was so eager to get the demo out, that i kinda rushed the "tutorial" and the menu.

But no worry, the real version wont have as much grammar errors (can't guarantee it will be perfect tho) .

Thx for the great score, and I hope you'll like the full version.